Dandelion

[harraser]

I don't feel this way
The Razors
The Broken Glass
But I remember well enough when I did

Swing your lashes this way honey
I don't feel this anymore
But I remember when I did
It's a useful tool to get your attention
Swing gorgeous black-holes this way honey

My dandelion in an ornate vase

I've always been....

Butterfingers.

You'll thank me one day.

 

[plazma]

There isn't too much I can say to that one.

So I'll just settle for "Fucken ay!"

-plaz out-

 

[up all night]

Feels like a moment in the mind of harraser. Things that are seemingly so quirky and unrelated brought together into a seamless piece.

But then again I'm probably very wrong.

 

[Dexium]

Harraser, I really like this piece. I love the way you've phrased it, the tempo is really beautiful.

The first time I read it I thought it was an expression of bitterness, but then everything clicked for me, and I went "ooOOooer".

You know, I think my fingers are quite buttery (new word?) too.

 

[neverwas]

*reply got lost in server problem so heres the new one*

I don't feel this anymore
But I remember when I did

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You'll thank me one day.

...yes i quoted you...

as short as this was and telling u i wasnt going to reply i felt the need to after re-reading it

i did like this one as different as it was from what you would normally post hun. reading different styles and forms by good writters like urself is something i enjoy doing.

i especailly liked these two lines. it some what describes a stage in my life that only i am expected to understand...and something that to some degree scares me but to some degree also brings some form of relief. i always like reading your work ant. nice peice.

*hugs* kel

 

[up all night]

*bump*