Damn them all

[xsepetiontotherule]

feelings coming through my hands
shocking touch to the grasp
i cant help wondering why i try
romance is lost becouse she is
scorpion sting into my heart
wanting to make everyone happy
pulling into everywhichway
unclean is what i am
those who are important care not
why cant i deside
when the choise comes close
i scar two people for which i adore
now the time is upon and now i cry
sclude myself untill dawns light

 

[Jungle Bunny]

Check it I dug these three lines "unclean is what i am- those who are important care not- why cant i decide". I dug them for reasons I'm sure that were not intended. If you could would you please explain your take on them. You have peaked my interest. “Idealism is Contagious”- DjDemoDirect.Co.Uk

 

[xsepetiontotherule]

i would like to explane these lines but people i wrote this poem about are on bluelight.

 

[Jungle Bunny]

That seems silly
So because they are on Bluelight you can not explain the poem? Check it- email the explanation.
[ 05 November 2002: Message edited by: Jungle Bunny ]