damaged

[doof-kittie]

bruised and broken
a fractured soul
clumsily sellotaped together
silent screams echo tales of
shattered dreams
the porcelain cracks
the light fades

 

[cherub]

I like the way you used the words in this poem, heartbreaking and true sometimes about life but powerful message,,,,, seems that we all have been there at one point.

Great stuff!

 

[ev0l]

"silent screams echo tales of
shattered dreams"

i really like this line

 

[RareForm]

bruised and broken
a fractured soul
clumsily sellotaped together
silent screams echo tales of
shattered dreams
the porcelain cracks
the light fades

Wow...this fantastic...i'd like to see more..:D

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Beautiful.

 

[doof-kittie]

thank you all for your lovely comments. This is the first time I've shared any of my poems with others. Its nice to be appreciated