d e l i r i o u s

[mariacallas]

delirious

i am
for all the things i do
for you, and this, as i
soak under the rain
waiting in total vain
for my greyblue lil nokia
to scream your goddamn name
as i am racing
up interstate 66
heart pounding
helpless and hurt
furiously set on fire
you left me tepid
dizzy with desire
every last thing
i own
packed tightly
into the trunk of
my only way out
towards a boy
so smug and so sure
yet i take it in stride
even as it kills me
all judgement cast aside.
knowing full well
and
knowing not
a goddamned thing
except
the manner in which
your voice crawls like song
vibrating a thin wire
my panic briefly gone
the last stretch
the final thing
until
wound tighter
than a clockspring
i dive right into
this madness you bring.

 

[OmnicronDEVIL]

Lovely description of the madness that is love, or the hope of love.

 

[Negative]

knowing full well
and
knowing not
a goddamned thing



You hit how I feel so much on the goddamned head . . .

Thaddeus

 

[EverythingsEventual]

honey this is the coolest piece of writing

well done

 

[Rusty Cage]

We don't like when the judgement is cast aside...
when the judgement is cast aside then we can't get down...

( Sweet poem Crystalcallas I like )

 

[David]

I feel it everyday I'm alive. I wish I only had someone to share it with.

 

[sagakontinues]

beautiful!

 

[Frustrated]

I am commenting a lackluster forward of my understanding for this, Marya's cockmeat irrationality poem. Truly a fess miss fessmess nuss

 

[Stasis]

This one hits deep. I love it hun.

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

I could definately relate to this. nice job.

 

[mariacallas]

you guys thank you :D

 

[Geez-A]

nice words love.