Crash

[drug_wench]

You're coming down bad
And you're coming down fast
You must have known
That the drug wouldn't last
Your heart has gone mental
You're scratchy, annoyed
And all human contact
You now must avoid
You're paranoid, angry
You've been up for weeks
Didn't you know
There aren't happy speed freaks?
If you can get yourself
Up off the floor
You know you'll only
Go find yourself more
Cos that is your life, speed freak
Dot and a dash
And then it's like this
Just a burn then a crash

 

[New]

I felt myself slipping from my chair while reading that...also looking at my previous experiences with the crash.

Pleasurable read.

 

[colicolo]

i strongly enjoyed the boldness of this piece. no vauge themes, pure, defiant and wholesome. great work.

 

[drug_wench]

thanks both of u

 

[wesmdow]

very true.

well written, also.

 

[B9]

Aye DW that kinda sums it up in a nutshell !



Why do we delude ourselves? (rhetorical question)

 

[drug_wench]

but a gd question nevertheless......thanks again guys

 

[IXinX]

I like your style a lot. Simple yet thought-out and flowing. You never fluff about with each 2 lines written and thus their impact is increased. It drives the point home hard.

 

[drug_wench]

thanks IXinX - that means a lot to me, cos sumtimes i feel like all my poems r too alike
i REALLY want to get this book published (ive written a book of these poems) so im glad for any positive feedback on my style! :D