Consumated Reality

[mirabii]

Consummated desecration
A pure and reckless pasionnate embrace
With a demise more real
With no defence to face
An immortal sense of destination
Where time warped out of synchronisation
And a heart beat failed
To find it's motivation
It's dedication melting into
A calm and reasoned irresolution
Where destruction met with
Creation forming an irresistible
Attraction to chaotic conclusions
The beauty distorted to
Tear stained eyes among a sea
Of crimson conflict
The enchantment torn into
Slivers of imagination
Broken by the ice cold hand of
Reality

 

[harraser]

Mirabii, this is such a powerfully worded story to show the passion and then pain and emptyness of a relationship that doesnt work, or perhaps a person that you finally see for who they really are....
It took my breath away. wonderful!!! thank you.
[ 21 August 2002: Message edited by: harraser ]

 

[plazma]

Abso-Fucking-Lutely A-Fucking-Mazing.
I love the way you manage to turn a bunch of words into a picture of a whirlpool of emotions and feelings.
Thanks for sharing this. :D
-plaz out-