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Ataxia

Ataxia

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Here's a collection of by a friend. He's a bluelighter and a bit shy. I'm sure he'll own up to them once his poems receive positive feedback.

Conciousness
by nentash on Apr 27 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: Oct 18, 10:52
In Category: Weird. 5 total.

Contained withing my own imagination
Confused Without contestation
Laze about life while i change the staion
A dent of me in the life of a cusion

Can you find the lost absess in your mind
By using fatal medication
Can you lose something ever so kind
So kind as it was to keep you waiting

So in the darkness on unconciousness
Can you realise there is nothingness
If nothingness is not really there
How can you tell you care
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Many Times
by nentash on Apr 27 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: Oct 18, 10:52
In Category: Hope. 3 total.

Too many times i have waited
Too much time has gone
I feel im looking for something
I've been looking for too long

As more time keeps elapsing
Makes my spine feel like collapsing
Like a line of sugar coated String
It Gets crushed by everything

So i continue to sit and wait
Filled with splendorous hate
Dancing in a pool of self pity
Emptyness the size of a city
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All i want
by nentash on Apr 27 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: Oct 18, 10:52
In Category: Love. 4 total.

Shes the one i need
Shes the one i care for
her presence i depend of
she makes me more than none

Around her i feel complete
Like sunshine in the day
I never want to leave her
I just dont know what to say

Like a puppy misses its master
Like a slave misses its life
I miss her more than ever
Im glad shes in my life

So my love for her grows stronger
Stronger than a bull
She is what i live her
What do you expect after all
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Need
by nentash on Apr 27 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: Oct 18, 10:52
In Category: Hope. 2 total.

I sit here and im falling
Falling through the black of night
I feel i want to struggle
but i have no need to fight

Something inside tells me
Tells me that its right
Perhaps its fate controlling me
on this uneventfull night

Time it seems to fly away
When your sitting doing the same
I have no control over anything
when nothing knows my name

So i cant let the wind take me
Blow me down to hell
but time is hard to keep hold of
With my mind inprisoned in its cell
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NeverEnding
by nentash on Apr 27 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: Oct 18, 10:52
In Category: Dark. 5 total.

i lay awake in bed, sleeping
my mind does nothing but think
i lay there thinking of nothing
and nothing is hard to think

life is so hard to do, easy
all i do causes nothing but pain
my life is so full of meaning
my meaning, to fade away

so my mind begins to dwindle
on rippling waves fate
what is this that happens to me
this echoing i hate

so i sit the mind of oblivian
all so empty and bare
sometimes i think im empty
perhaps theres nothing there
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Never Known
by nentash on Apr 27 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: Oct 18, 10:52
In Category: Dark. 2 total.

can you see
can you tell
i have never seen
my life is hell

things seemed great
things seemed fine
the only one who knows the truth
is that voice inside my mind

i do not tell anyone
they really cannot know
the only ones who relate to me
finds somewhere else to go

i look for peace and silence
but im left with sound in mind
i cant find what im looking for
because what im looking for is hard to find

the happyness inside me
is devoured by regret
i wish i paid more attention
i wish i gave more time

but still i sit and kick myself
after all this distance
this distance we take in life
i can help but wonder why

because its all very pointless
why live just to die
the experiences we have
just fade and crumble in time
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Searching
by nentash on Apr 27 (bookmark) (print) (next)
Author's Last Login: Oct 18, 10:52
In Category: Dark. 3 total.

Searching


The end of the world as we see it
is seen at just the end
the end of our loveless lifes
is love all we attend

we search for somthing continuously
we search for every kind
can we see whats in front of us
or whats in the back of our minds

day after day i think about it
why must this happen to me
but why should it happen to everyone
i guess its pointless lifes we leed

after all i think that we should enjoy
and maybe not think about the future
because everyones future is curtain
in this world of uncurtanty
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Perhaps if you post less at a time people will be more inclined to respond?

Good job on the ideas, and i like the way that they've played with the meanings of the words... :)

Although a spell check wouldn't hurt... not that i can talk though! ;)
 
Cosmic Mist said:
Perhaps if you post less at a time people will be more inclined to respond?

Good job on the ideas, and i like the way that they've played with the meanings of the words... :)

Although a spell check wouldn't hurt... not that i can talk though! ;)
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I carried forward all of the original typographic and grammatical errors.

Zedrich said:
Everyone likes that one the most....thank you
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I present Zedrich to you; the author of these lovely poems!
 
Hmmmmm im not sure what people think about bumps but um.....
Bump!
 
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