Cold

[RareForm]

I collapse
Next to your
Cold and silent
Body.

It’s the pain
I can’t take
This anymore
So I just wave
My goodbyes
And your eyes flow
With tears and holy
Light surrounds.

Complicate my existence
In this world
I give it all away.
To be inside my head
Inside and lost
And happy.

I dedicate my love
And life to you
Again
I suffocate
Inside my delusions
And their decadence.

I forgot all that
I knew
And I grew into the
Fly on the wall
Of your heart.

I can’t go on
Anymore
Not any longer.
Just let me out
Outside to breathe
Again.

I am so gone
Away
I am what I can never be.
I will go on
And on.

I will forget my part.

 

[neverwas]

I am so gone
Away
I am what I can never be.
I will go on
And on.

moving on is always the hardest...

 

[TiberCross]

GREAT!!

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very nice, great use of words

 

[up all night]

Yeah this was good. I liked it.

And I just noticed you've made 1800 posts in 4 months!!oh my!

 

[Dandy]

Very nice.

 

[katmeow]

Good stuff... it's hard not to sound cliched when writing about pain. This is nice work!

 

[beanpoophead]

very nice, i like!

 

[E-girl]

moving on is always the hardest...

agreed.

nice poem, by the way. full of raw emotion that i think a lot of us can relate to.

 

[cherub]

agreed e-girl alot of pain comes through this work, very raw,,,,,, enjoyed it.