chaos theory

[xiola-muse]

(this is only a rough draft...)
POST WEEKEND BLUES
DAMN, I CAN'T UNDERSTAND
WHERE IT ALL GOES...
ALL OF A SUDDEN
THE SUN RISES
AND THE FOUR OF YOU
CLIMB A MOUNTAIN.
"THERE YOU ARE!", THEY SAY
"WE'VE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU!"
STUNNED..WE SMILE,
INTRODUCE OURSELVES
A HYPER JITTER OF EMOTION
FLIGHS HIGH ABOVE THE CLOUDS
UNTIL THE TRANCE
BRINGS US BACK DOWN.
STUMBLING NEAR A RIDGE
THE BOYS DECIDE WE SHOUDLN'T TAKE THIS ROUTE
WE LAUGH, FIND A NEW PATH,
BUILD A FORT AND SLEEP TILL NOON.
BEFORE LONG
THE CAR RIDE HOME
PUTS THE THREE TO SLEEP
WHILE I PRETEND
IM DRIVING MY CHILDREN HOME...

 

[*MEG*]

Well Done!
I especially like the last part about "driving my kids home", It really brings a sense of community into the whole thing!
I likes it!

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***Why Drink And Drive When You Can Smoke And Fly?***

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

yeeaahh! that sums up last weekend perfectly!i love it ms. muse....and boy did it feel good to finally sleep on that car ride home.....