Can't See

[-|Twiztd|-]

Burning holes inside my head, Oh how I wish that I were dead.
Lie in bed I cannot sleep, my body aches - it feels so meek.

[eyes won't open-
I'm trying to scream.
Choking on words,
of painful memories]

Cannot put this love to rest, I tried too hard and made a mess.
Turn your head just look at me, I wasn't the best but could I ever be?

[eyes can't open-
its hard to breath.
slowly dying,
you're killing me.]
{You took it all away from me,
give it back,
my sanity.}

Hope you know that it's too late, you broke me open exposing hate.
Made you blind so you can't see just what it is your gonna get from me.

[My eyes are open,
I can see.
Loves a sickness,
it poisoned me.]
{Love or hate me,
I won't feel guilty
when you say..
"why not kill me".}

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very different. I really liked it. Very Nice

 

[cherub]

Love this poem, maybe cause i can relate on some level,,,, maybe many can. Great work!

 

[faceless_shadow]

excellent! very good work

 

[neverwas]

oooer this was interesting to read nice.