cant be expected to understand: so if you dont dont worry

[cloud 9]

i have found that writing can be an expression of
feelings from the soul
expressing on paper instead of hiding it away
kicked back
smokin my black, watchin tv
learning as i think of ways to share with all
damn this heart
holding me back
misguiding and misjudging me like so
i look into emptyness
while holding it so
seeing is believing, understanding is my key
so writing expresses thought
but maybe not for me
how can you understand
words from a confused disgruntled old man
young is my age
old is my thought
read and believe my mind is shot
switch from this to this and back again
confusing to the eye or the mind you see
dont try and understand
just leave nice reviews
it continues my writing
until i choose, not to write for you to view.
[ 10 January 2002: Message edited by: cloud 9 ]

 

[Web]

Groovy
Whether you believe it or not, I do understand.

 

[atri]

while i may not understand what you were trying to convey, i understood what was said, in my own way. when i post here, i feel like someone had shot me in the back of my head, and all the shit that flew out the other side splattered all over the moniter. then they clicked add reply.
if poetry was a gun to your head, would you pull the trigger?
atri

 

[allstarmaterial]

 

[PixieGirl]

Cloud-
Great as always and I even understood it

 

[Dagny]

I understand that pleasure or pain, both are valid emotions, along with so many others, and that I love your way of describing the way you feel. When there are twenty different ways of looking at a situation, and they are all fighting for your attention, sometimes the only thing to do is to give them each five minutes and then ignore them all. I miss you. And I love you, hun, see you soon.