Can you feel it?

[mashead testing]

Colours swirl around my mind
melting like paint dripping from my soul
every texture of the music fills me
every feeling I get surrounds me
A melodic dream of reality
something further than life itself
something with more worth
more energy than ive ever felt myself
Expanding my thoughts
intriguing my mind
every second I try and control myself
never knowing what I might find
My body unconciously unwinds
moving softly at first
I feel myself fall into time
drifting to the unspoken words
Its all I have heard and everything I realise
not something I cant read between the lines
my vision doesnt lie and I cant hide
a magical effect on life
Its you but its this
still unclear as my thoughts blitz
blowing up new colours
everything is a colour or part of a dream
I know nothing appears how it seems
but this is meant to be
feelings rain down on me
from my head to my toes my whole body glows
I cant get out of the way
im trapped and left excited
no words could describe what I want to say
im all emotions and colours
Shining, my heart is sighing
breathing for air
engulfing feelings I never knew were there
im left shocked but I cant get enough
I dont know what love is
but this is surely too much
ive never had love from any one individual
and never been able to love
But for something that exists as an emotion
I will take this as real
not anything will ever come close to this
its just something I feel.

 

[rm-rf]

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MUSHROOOOOOOOOOOMS!
eh sorry.

I dont know what love is
but this is surely too much
ive never had love from any one individual
and never been able to love
I feel ya man. Ever hear paranoid by black sabbath? The lyrics are my life man. This was really good, im gonna write music for it tonight, the lyrics flow together good.
NICE ONE!
~wood

 

[Angelight]

I know nothing appears how it seems
but this is meant to be
feelings rain down on me
from my head to my toes my whole body glows
^^^^ thats my favorite part

 

[rm-rf]

Colours swirl around my mind
melting like paint dripping from my soul
every texture of the music fills me
every feeling I get surrounds me
^^^^^^
Thats my favorite part, and its better!

 

[vurtomatic]

there seems to an impetus in the words which flow very well.
well done

 

[harraser]

lol @ WOOD.....those lines made me think of mushies too
great poem mash, I liked the way it started off (to me and Wood at least) sounding like its about a drug experience but ended being about love, Ive thought of those as similar more than a few times myself

 

[E-girl]

Shining, my heart is sighing
breathing for air
engulfing feelings I never knew were there
im left shocked but I cant get enough
your words are so beautiful. nice imagery. this is definitely one of my favorites that you've written. thank you for sharing this.

 

[nephil]

this is very good! Beautiful flow, beautiful emotion!