burnt letters

[Haza]

burning letters
of times ago
reading each
till the flame they go
memories and feelings
of times long that passed
burning letters
from my past
in the mirror
theres not much to tell
pennies falling
down a wishing well
opposite portrayal
of a figure
cold and frail
now that theyre gone
theres little remnince
to look back on
singeing edges
moving within
your letters
my burnt offering
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"30,000 feet? woah...thats bigger than my house" ~ TJ sleep talkin
AIM: munkyrice

 

[Mellabopper]

holy shit.
this is simply amazing. this sounds like it could be a song - its got a good rhythm to it.

Mella

 

[Haza]

^^
thanks =) youre someone i really look up to on BL, your reply really means alot to me, thanks...and when i was writing that i was kinda writing it with rythm, kinda wierd you knew that
[This message has been edited by Haza (edited 11 November 2001).]

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

that was awesome

...i've burnt letters before, in my kitchen sink...i wouldn't recommend it though, you just end up with a big ole mess.

 

[Haza]

hehe i usually go outside to do it...i do it all the time