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broken mirror

shittykitty

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when the shadows crawl in the headlights , i think ive been staring too long
i dont even recognize my face anymore , but this mirrors been in pieces for months
the object of this deception has been me
i hate lying to myself to sleep at night , but its the only way to keep from holding my breath
just let this moment pass, theres not anything to hold
when i awake its never as bright as it used to be
and here in this world of greys and off-yellows i find comfort
the comfort to suffer,the lonliness to cry, and the sorrow to dread tomorrow
i ask myself if it could be better, would i even allow it
 
I'm not sure exactly what to say, but I wanted to say something. To put that into words..
I loved it.. It scared me, and touched me, and strangled me.
I liked it. I really liked it.
 
i wanted to thank everyone that actually supported this....i was goin for a new thing and thought it would suck...i guess i can get outta the rhymin shiet...lil...i dont know how to go bout emailin you...i wish i would have discovered this website earlier-bRaNdI
 
...I dont know whats happened lately but Im outta profound things to say....I realllllly like your work (good move ousting the rhyming though, I dont know what your stuff is like with rhyming in but I just prefer unrhymed stuff anyway :) )well Im off to go and find some more of your stuff to read. *hugs*
 
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