brilliant disaster

[dope_sick_girl]

true feelings disguised with harmful words. days full of sentnces, words like razors. who are you? i thought i knew. you lied. your eyes make promises your heart could not keep even if it were a matter of life and death. a fraudulent shell of a person, occupied my a beast that would assuredly make you feel that an eternity in the proverbial hell would be better. why do i even care? no answer to that. don't even dignify that question with an attempted answer. so much hate, but the hate reassures me that i still have somewhat of a heart. even as cold as that heart may be. siberian winters cannot compare. the pleasure i recieve from the tears i have caused are my brilliant disaster.

 

[fungus44]

nice?

 

[skjalff]

i like it a lot, a stream of consciousness that carries a lot of emotion and energy, while being very rhythm-driven and smooth.. I enjoyed reading it a lot, but I think it would be easier to intake if broken down into shorter lines IMHO.. Good work and i'm looking forward to chatting with you soon!


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