bipolar

[Tanuki_23]

On the verge of tears,
and I don't know why.
Hating life,
with no good reason.
I try to merge the fears,
I won't cry.
Creating strife,
with the passing of another season.

(the reason this is so short is I just dont have the will to keep writing this depressing crap, I guess that it just goes with being bi-polar, being pulled in 2 directions. Im prob not even bi-polar, their is prob no such thing, but hey, why do I feel so?)

On the verge of laughter,
and I don't know why.
Loving life,
do I need a good reason?
I surge through the year,
Who cares if I die?
Dropping the knife,
Happily Im here, but is He done?

(im still in a horriffic mood, with no good reason, and I tried to write a nice other half to go with the depressing 1st part, b/c I dont know, I dont want is to be all "look at me, im depressed, waaaaaaaaaaaa", and Id like a nice dichotimy to go along too, but my mood shows through the writing.)

 

[princess_kitti]

These two work really well as verse 1 and 2 .... if you take out the explaining and write a 3rd verse perhaps along the lines of .....

On the verge of understanding
and i don't know why
Confused with life

or something like that ..... i dunno. this third verse would pull the other two together and then they would work to contrast and compliment each other

BTW i really like your writing i think it works well :D

 

[r4nd0mj0k3r]

Tears drip down my cheek,
as I ponder what went wrong,
I feel heartache only, happyness long gone,
I can't explain it truthfully,
It's weird being me,
No wellbeing
until I do some drugs, I feel good again, I'm flying high
But in the end i'll blow away
Just like a kite
At Night I don't know why, but I feel so lonely
Even if a few around me,
I just want to disappear and forget every memory

^^ just a lil bit how i feel now, in my Bipolar depression mood I feel worse then death sometimes., kinda emo