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Beneath the trees

femmme fatal

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Her lashes rest upon her cheek,
now stained with tracks of burning tears;
her eyes no longer need to seek,
the sources of her deepest fears.
The fullness still holds in her lips,
her cheeks still smooth and rose and lush;
her ears still warm unto the tips,
they do not hear the curious rush.
Her hair wound loose about her head,
her dress in tatters at her knees;
her soft pale skin now stained with red,
she lays like death beneath the trees.
The field around her's lush and green,
the dew still lies upon the ground;
the breeze which plays across this scene,
stirs not a chord or note of sound.
the tree tops meet above her head,
they cast a dappled shaddow down;
their fallen leaves lay as her bed,
spread out around her like a gown.
The sunset's flood of red and pink,
it bathes her in a golden glow;
and as the sun begins to sink,
her last breath drawn, she lets it go.
aj the femme
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the extra M is for MmmMmmmm
Be Good!!!
[This message has been edited by femmme fatal (edited 20 August 2001).]
 
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Unbelievable!!!
Great job.
(BTW, I popped this post's cherry..you never forget your first:
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Brownie
 
thank you
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i wrote it for a creative writting class... we were supposed to find a picture, focus on one thing and zoom out... he gave me a 17/20... damn gramatical errors....
i wish i still had the picture, it was beautiful
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aj the femme
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the extra M is for MmmMmmmm
Be Good!!!
 
this was really lovely. the words fall into place in just the right way, and the imagery is strong.
20/20 !
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
"...there are 2 paths, you can go back, but in the long run... there's still time to change the road you're on..."
 
Aj, that was excellent, just as everything you do is. Please continue to keep your creativness flowing.
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It's always a pleasure reading everything you write.
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Coreo
 
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