been a good day.

[it was.]

haze phase the ways the days seem to bind.
next day next stage unless debt remains.
cloudy yet unrefined i mind
to the degree depends on what i find
found a mirror and starred into it
got stuck
and it was all about me
found a reflection
there was a difference
one i didnt feel and the other not so distant.
found a mirror and held it there for too long
broke that fuck.
didnt like how it made me notice i was wrong.
found a reflection.
had fun in the moment half because i didnt know it
knowing later i'd find one was too close
and the other only showed up when everything copecetic
which was so
so it grows
so its a seed so the seed knows
so its a step next step up
three to go oh
whoa where why is the wind white?
im high.

 

[(Wordy)]

I like the freedom of this, the assured voice, the rhymes bending every which way, the way that it expresses things simply without taking obvious routes. Nice work!

 

[lostNfound]

seems high

Like Wordy said, awesome how it rhymes but the actual theme is all over the place but still makes some kind of sense.