Beauty

[Rhiannon]

My desire for her grows each day
But she, I cannot touch
There's no greater force known to man
Than the power of a crush
Haunt me in my every thought
Soothe me with your voice
You're a dream I'll never have
But oh, to have that choice
Free of traditional stereotypes
Natural beauty reigns your face
Your sharply tuned intellect
Puts mere mortals in their place
I don't believe in love;
But merely in obsession
My college-age forbidden fruit--
I must use my discretion
A void of uncreativity
Has been plaguing me
Yet with one look into your gentle eyes
It submits without a plea
I can offer you nothing more
Than my thoughts in the form of a prayer
And the assurance that--for me--
This is affection is oh so rare.

 

[runawaygrrrl]

I really like this

Haunt me in my every thought
Soothe me with your voice
You're a dream I'll never have
But oh, to have that choice
And that...^ yeah...
Your words are beautiful

 

[Nietzche]

. . . its as if Sapho herself has taken possession of you!
" . . . like a cat in the dark / and then she is the darkness . . ."
Wonerful words.

 

[Erotik Poet]

This is absolutely beautiful. I love the rhyming techniques you use.
"You're a dream I'll never have, but oh to have that choice"
Wonderful technique there.

 

[E-girl]

brilliant

 

[Rhiannon]

Sapho? That's quite a bit of an exaggeration, don't you think? But thank you for the compliment.

 

[Bleed for the cure]

Well spoken, my friend, well spoken.