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Beautiful Nothing

yakksoho

yakksoho

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Hullo all, I have been absent from this board for about a year. I come back and suddenly its all spiffed up. I'm so excited. Well let me join in here with another one of these transsexual nightmare ones from a few months back:


Suddenly he melted away
And she with him
And they lay dissipated
Naked in the bedclothes
I saw that there was nobody
There
Nobody there

Open your eyes
You are nobody
You are beyond
Finally beyond
Close your eyes
And you are still nothing
Beautiful nothing

If I let go forever
Neither of you will survive
All that's left of both of you
Is a residue of a smile
That you can't wash off my face
Ask me what is peace
And I will laugh and say
Look around you
I am lost between the bedsheets
Grinning like a fool
With all gender stripped away
All that's left is
The indelible smile
And who would ever guess
That I have been crying for a decade
At the loss of my other half
They weren't halves at all
They have melted into nothing
Beautiful nothing

You aks me what is peace
I tell you
Nothing

28.05.03
 
Very well written....
Thanks for making nothing beautiful....

~B

(this reminded me of Pearl Jam's "Nothing Man")
 
yakksoho said:


Look around you
I am lost between the bedsheets
Grinning like a fool
With all gender stripped away
All that's left is
The indelible smile
And who would ever guess
That I have been crying for a decade
At the loss of my other half
They weren't halves at all
They have melted into nothing
Beautiful nothing
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Wow, that really WAS beautiful. The above section in particular really brought a lump to my throat. Learning is really difficult sometimes. :)

Thanks so much for sharing your work!

--Raz--
 
i can see this being dubbed over a trance track.
but that's just me...

i love it.
 
I just had to comment on this again.....this fits all to well with me right now...that i actually want to cry...not for the last week of hell...stealing, degrading and all that goes along with it....but for the beautiful nothing....

ur right ya know!!!!

~B
 
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