baby, i think i hate you

[cand-E bamber]

your lips are turning blue
and i can see
i can see through it all
your empty complements,
your broken words
your blatant lies
take me off this pedestal
and take your halo back
im anticipating your call
and another useless fight
save me the emptiness,
just for tonight
youve got me trained,
not to say much
but ill talk when its worth your while
you wont listen
because
im gorgeous
im beautiful
im sexy
im everything you think i need to hear
if i told you what i thought
then would i be taught,
never to speak again
whatever the consequence,
i hate you
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Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? - Douglas Adams

 

[Robdob]

Sweet

I like how the poem built up to the last line "I Hate You." Good stuff! Showed strong emotion, and good conscious.

 

[Dutchram]

I LIKE IT! Ive been there. You captured the emotion with a great selection of words. Made my day.