awareness?

[goodnitestar]

A million souls
Distilled
into one single interupted silence
Passing by us through us
Inside us
and another world, past another era
escaping , elluding
crashing into another careless ear
blinking like a strobe light
into each trained eye
Watching your every movement
erecting a open door into
angry anticipation
spreading dead leaves across cold wilted grass
wiling to burn the entire feild
in a moments grasp, in a moments touch
a noise spilled like rain drops
from a empty sky filled night
unaware this generation
wake up we just might
heed the call of life

 

[Living_Proof]

I just finished reading all the posts you put up, and I must say that I'm really impressed. I really like your style of writing, and I especially enjoyed this one. I could really see every image that your words conveyed, and there was so much soul spun through each line. Oh, and thanks for your thoughts on my writing too! Please write more, I'd love to read it!