Awaken My Life

[RareForm]

Where has my mind gone?
Eclipsed by an unjust world.
I've felt, I've thought, I've needed
PAIN
To quench the desire for..........
LIFE
Only to be raped by the unforgiving force
HELP ME! I'm trapped inside.......
My own mind
Who feels this way?
Did God envision a life of Pain?
Ripping at my heart, my afflicted soul
Awaken me from sin
Awaken me from PAIN
Awaken me from everthing
Ripping, Tearing.......Unmerciful.........
LIFE
Please someone awaken my life

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very nice writing my man.

 

[faceless_shadow]

dang...that was really good.

 

[cherub]

I enjoy reading this piece.
Very Vivid and strong in the writting

excellent!