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[Raz]

Ancient gods in caveponds
Dwelling in the smallest part of our imagination
There are no lessons we can learn
When we're always looking out.

 

[cherub]

So true,, short piece but if you read it over and over like i did,, it becomes more powerful eachtime.

i can say, i just simply enjoyed it.

I think you have a great mind in there

 

[KaideAlike44]

i like short poems....so this one is defintaley good..

 

[katmeow]

There are no lessons we can learn
When we're always looking out.

Niiiiicceee!!

 

[StuffedTiger]

I can say word to that.