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[~ * ~ MaD HaTTeR ~ * ~]

The rain pours down upon my body,
I lay in the drenched grass,
My naked body making its imprint upon the world,
The wet grass tickles my skin,
The skies tears hide my own shameful cries,
The thunders screams echo in my ears,
The bounding sound drowns out my heart beat,
The rain seeps into my body,
Cleansing my soul and washing away my pain,
In the rampid storms of life,
I lay myself down,
To be recreated by the clouds....
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I am lost, I've gone to find myself, if I should return before I get back have me wait....
ever dance with the devil in the pale moon light.... -joker
AOL name: MaDHaTTeR92578

 

[Brownie]

If you keep writing poems like this, I will be your biggest fan here in words.
Again, this is very deep, and in my drunken stage, I had to read this twice, but it all makes perfect sense.
Great job!

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