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another rebellious seventeen year old.

RavinRaych

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watch her jump
hate escaping from the soles of her shoes
she crushes up the stencil
placed into her mind
or at least it was
so she could be "perfect"
produce an overrated image
clone the preferred hypocrisy...
she's tired of retracing the same lines
of a picture she has came to be
and hated every bit of
It's taken too long to get back around
to the same person she hated before
and
she thinks.
how long did it take her?
to realize she wasn't fit to wear lipstick
on lips that were already beautiful enough.
she was too unenthused to stand
morning after morning
for a county who would not stand for her
and back around the stencil she went
after the blessing of being placed
into the hands of education
oh the merry-go-round, is far from merry
and she's jumping off
her lips are chapped
and legs are weak
but she's not through jumping
she's not through screaming
into the ears of people
who have volunteered to be deaf
and to ignore the sounds of their conciseness
beating down the edges of their thoughts
trying to escape and change the record
that's been playing so long,
that maybe you don't even hear it
but she does
clear as fingernails down the chalkboard
And maybe she never will be satisfied
at what the given boundaries are
but to you
all she will ever be
is just another rebellious seventeen year old.
 
believe it or not, there is no stencil. and there arent any format lines. no one is trying to make you ordinary. ive noticed teens have a tendency to rebel against their best intrests. i do at least, cause id rather be a fuck up, than be anyones princess. but it is important to stray from rebellion, and onto a less traveled path. a more productive benificial path. be happy and healthy, and careless about how theyd like to see you.
 
The word "careless" resonates within my mindstream daily now.
...sucks.
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( Nice piece I really mean here )
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believe it or not, but i do believe that people have expectancies for everyone in this world to become. I don't care that you disagree with me. But that's something I have felt and noticed ever since i was growing up, and i found wings, and i flew away from what made me unhappy, so im not concerned with how people interpret anything i do, or who i am. because what it comes down to is me and...me. I just wanted to post what i feel...maybe i shouldn't anymore and maybe what it comes down to all that is real, is only what you feel, and who is to say what's right and wrong? who was placed in charge to make that decision? exactly.
plurr
raychul
 
it seems impossible to break free from the life that theyve mapped out for you sometimes, but there is always this option: leave. if youre gonna be unsatisfied with your life forever cause you are always wondering what could have been then go and find out what could have been.you may hurt other people, freinds,family and leaving these behind will hurt you more than anyone else but is there really any worthier task than finding out how far you could go? the only advice I offer is that any decision you make is made free from fear or ambition, decide with a cool head, not in anger and youll always do the right thing
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freedom is possible if youre willing to give up everything to get it.
good luck and remember theres always those who know how you feel
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"if there were no rewards to reap,
no loving embrace to see me through
this tedious path Ive chosen here
I certainly would have walked away by now.
And I still may."-MJK TOOL
 
hey, rach, love. it's mary. you already know that i'm in love with this poem, and i think the suggestion that "there is no stencil" wasn't meant to stifle your idea or say that you were "wrong," but merely suggest that you shouldn't feel like you were expected to conform to anything. anyway, yes, you do have a gift and you're my best friend and i love you.
-mary.
 
to Amber::
I agree with raych completely there most definitely is a stencil for young people, the guilt you feel from the look on your parents face when you tell them you arent gonna go to collage, the endless subtle hints about what they want you to be.... there is a stencil and even though its not done conciously it is still put there by everyone around you.as for teens rebelling against their best interests, who are you or anyone else to say what our best interests are?....I know this comes across as overly hostile but really Im just airing how some of us feel, dont take it as an attack or anything.
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"if there were no rewards to reap,
no loving embrace to see me through
this tedious path Ive chosen here
I certainly would have walked away by now.
And I still may."-MJK TOOL
 
for the record, i didnt mean any disrespect. i gave my 2 cents. i apologize. people have a tendency to disprove everything.
[This message has been edited by amber :: (edited 30 November 2001).]
 
words can soo be misunderstood,oneday theyll invent a system of fonts for different tones of voice so you can know what people really mean...until then hope I didnt cross any lines
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ps please never apologise to me,its life, things happen,people misunderstand (me more than most), but overall were only human and nothing we could do could possibly be bad enough to be worth appologising to me..... not put well but Im sure youll either figure it out or accept me as a headcase and just get over it....love ant
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"if there were no rewards to reap,
no loving embrace to see me through
this tedious path Ive chosen here
I certainly would have walked away by now.
And I still may."-MJK TOOL
[This message has been edited by harraser (edited 01 December 2001).]
 
oh the merry-go-round, is far from merry
and she's jumping off
kinda depressing, but i see the point you're trying to make. and its a strong one.
create your own stencil in life. be your own person.
nice work.
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