another day..

[]ßr3@K[]

shit happens-
things change
fall appart
then rearrange
broken hearts
numbing pain
things start
then end again
simple thoughts
turn into words
my stomach's in knots
because of nerves
i think of you
and then of him
i think "why stay here?
but why give in?"
I can't think straight
I can't eat right
I can't stay awake
but can't sleep the night
My eyes are swollen
My body's strained
my love's been stolen
and my heart's in pain
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I'm sorry my writing is so
bad I really wish that I was
a better poet.

 

[]ßr3@K[]

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[cand-E bamber]

awe. ::hug:: your poem is so honest, i love it.

 

[CuDdLeS]

"I'm sorry my writing is so
bad I really wish that I was
a better poet. "
Your writing is far from bad (my opinion). I really like what you have written.
But even if I thought it was crap...you shouldn't apologize.