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[supersonic]

So a little poem I wrote way back when I was in love for the first time and learning the whole pain thing. I just think alot people can relate so here it be.
Together makes 0
The louder I get
The less you hear
The more I display
The less you care
The longer the time
The smaller the love
The more I push
The more you shove
The more I reason
The more erratic you get
The more I organize
The more you fret
The more I say this has to stop
The more you want it to go
You buil dam to my river
disturbing its ebb and flow
The more I try to cross your side
to comfort and caress
The more you try to push me off
wanting less and less
So I give up turn the heel
prepared to run away
But then you run after me
and try to make me stay
Yin and Yang perhaps are we
floating in the sea
But yin and yang disturb each other
leaving none happy

 

[PixieLoca]

Supersonic...
I relate Entirely! I was in a relationship for 8 long months giving my all only to feel rejected and shot down every time. It sucked. I loved this boy for so long for so many reasons, and he loved me back, but we argued a lot and he never showed me that he loved me in ways that I could understand. Finally when I told him to leave me (I would of left, but we were living in my house) he expressed love so deep for me that it brough tears to our eyes. I couln't believe it, but I ended up asking him to leave anyway. I didn't see him for a long time, and just last week I stopped by his new house. It was great to see him and I felt alot more respect for him on his own then I had before when we were together. It was easier to see him as a friend, and though the maic has worn off, as a friend I could tell that he genuinely cares for me. This was a really long response to your poem, but it really hit home. Beautiful, really.
I responded also to your reply to my riddle...check it out again.
-)ixieLoca

 

[roll-e-polly]

that was wonderful, i guess things never really work out in the order we want it to, i got hurt so many times i wont let it happen again, even if i have to be alone for the rest of my life,that was sweet

 

[*Lucyinthesky*]

How did this relationship end??
It sounds like you were really devoted to
this person - with not much in return.
It reminded me a little of the Beatles -
"Hello,Goodbye" only much more beautifully
expressed.
I hope you have coped with the pain that
you can really feel through your writing
and well done for getting your life back
on track after all that.
PEACE, then and take care,
------------------
xxLUCYxx
Don't be mean, give us a bean
xx**P.L.U.R.H(ugs)**xx

 

[supersonic]

Well that was written after the collapse of it all. I was with the girl for a year and a half, so it took a long time, and I mean a long time to get over it. But it made me a better person as does all the bad stuff. We're actually friends now, and she's just fallen in love again, so I'm kinda just laughin at her. The only problem that arose with that relationship, is that I'm a lot more careful to give someone my all when I'm with them now. But I'm learning to trust people again. Getting hurt is the risk you have to take