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And Life Goes On

sunEdltye

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You awake,
A new morning with dew.
The sun lingers,
But never fails to arise.
The trees are all torn,
The land is a disaster.
Last's nights tornado,
Took all it could.
The month before,
Your long love broke up with you.
A million hearts broken that day,
The only one that mattered was yours.
The news told you a thousand people died.
A thousand souls wiped off the Earth.
Their existance is nothing more than a news reel.
A great tragedy happenned,
A failed grade.
A failed student,
And a failed goal.
When the past comes back looking for you,
With it's aweful aweful visions.
Run, hide, and stay clear,
For you never know what it holds.
Someone you loved died,
Forever, they are gone.
Someone you like doesn't like you,
Forever, they will never like you.
Your day gets worse and worse.
The more you think the worse it gets.
At home your parents are fighting,
Everyones parents are fighting.
Repent or goto hell,
Goto hell or repent.
Preachers preach.
Suddenly the sun falls away,
Slowly, like a dying fawn.
Gently it goes to the other world,
The other globe.
The moon shines bright,
With trails like gold.
What a day you had,
What a time you experianced.
But when everything crumbles around you,
Life Goes On.
Evan
5/18/01
[This message has been edited by sunEdltye (edited 19 May 2001).]
 
evan
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hun, this is an awesome piece. you should post more of your work here
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::hugs::
Mella
 
great shtuff, bro....i liked this a lot.
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Maturity is a bitter disappointment for which no remedy exists, unless laughter can be said to remedy anything.
--Kurt Vonnegut, Jr.
 
truly amazing,
thanks evan, i needed to read something like this today...
much love
ange
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~*~"you've got to dance like nobody's watching and love like its never going to hurt"
 
Wow, Evan. I saw this the day you posted it (cause you gave me the link to it
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), but I couldn't come up with words for it.
I still can't, but you're amazing.
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Sometimes we forget that when something happens to us, somewhere else in the world it is also happening to thousands of others. This piece acts as a reminder. It reminds me that the world keeps revolving and that people keep existing regardless of their pain. Life does go on.
Great words, sunE.
 
Evan,, this was beautiful, i see you growing and maturing in your work,,, you have a great talent hun. mwah miss you!
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" Stay with me just for today and let your soul come rest for a minute. "
 
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