Amazing Grace

[allthewayin]

Amazing grace, how sweet the sound
Of bullshit lies you push on me
I once was lost, but now am found
Because my mind is free

T'was grace that taught my heart to fear
By trying to make me believe
How precious did that grace appear
By seeing how you deceive

Through many dangers, toils and snares
I have fallen and fought
My actions brought me safe thus far
Because I am all I've got

The Lord has promised good to me
But I read through his lies
He will my shield and portion be,
When Mary spreads her thighs

Yea when this flesh and heart shall fail
A physical life shall cease
Burn your book and silly veil
For my conscious will be released

When you die and god is not there
You will become the sun
You'll have no less days to sing god's lies
Then when you first begun

 

[manic_panic]

a dark, twisted take on the beloved classic.. i like it though.. its honest.. i can understand your desired aversion to the christian doctrine (and maybe pseudo-humble sentiments), through a lifetime of self-education on the world's most popular religion. this writ seems to express a profound liberation from that robotic christian standard of "god is good, god is great" etc. keep writin

 

[Dreamful~Nypmh]

God loves you anyways.

 

[clonicjerk]

What makes you think God owes you anything?

 

[swilow]

Its a church/system not a god/fairytale that is to blame. Inverting christiantiy is just inverted christianity. Blasphemy is meaningless unless you believe in the blasphemed.

 

[allthewayin]

a dark, twisted take on the beloved classic.. i like it though.. its honest.. i can understand your desired aversion to the christian doctrine (and maybe pseudo-humble sentiments), through a lifetime of self-education on the world's most popular religion. this writ seems to express a profound liberation from that robotic christian standard of "god is good, god is great" etc. keep writin

Yes, through my own experience with christianity and religion in my younger years, I was able to see the lies and stories for what they were. Region in most forms was only created to control the masses who cannot live with the truth that we don't know, and we won't know what's behind our existence until we die. Herd the sheep with fear of hell and suffering. Oh, and give us your money too. People are too afraid to live life thinking for them selves, and accepting the truth of NOT knowing, that they'd rather have someone tell them a story. Pathetic really.

However, I don't want to turn this thread into a religious debate. I am simply giving further insight to my piece of writing. These are just my personal opinions and I mean no offense to anyone.

God loves you anyways.

And Satan my friend, loves you.

What makes you think God owes you anything?

God does not owe me anything, because he does not exist. At least not in the tale of the bible.

Its a church/system not a god/fairytale that is to blame. Inverting christiantiy is just inverted christianity. Blasphemy is meaningless unless you believe in the blasphemed.

Agreed, but the church system stemmed from the fairytale that is the bible. God is me, and god is you. God is the trees and the sun and the water that bring life to earth. The energy that propels subatomic particles. God is life, and the force that sustains it. As we travel through plains of life, from this physical world to the next, we become closer to God, and ultimately becoming one with God.

Thanks for the feedback fellow Bluelighters,