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Furnace

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Remember in the beginning of "The Empire Strikes B
I got my flashlight ready.
It's 3 am, and I leave my house to retrieve one small bag.
I go outside to walk over to the dumpster, outside of the local near-by school.

The orange crime lamps light my path across the street and towards the large green dumpster that contains a bag that I threw away on Friday night. There were memories in that bag of a girl, lost but not far away. Gone but still remembered. She wasn't there when I hummed and hawed on my decision to get it back or not. It lay dormant in that dumpster all weekend long. I thought about it, and it flashed back to me at certain points where I wondered what I would do about it. Naturally, I forgot about it, but it would come back to me in flashes of indecision.

A friend of mine told me that it was good that I got rid of it.
Another told me that he regretted ever doing it.
So, I stood there in front of this green monster.

As I stand down the dumpster, I kind of hope that it'll be empty, and hence, the bag would be lost forever. No need for me to be here, and a reason for me to wake up and forget this ever happened. I get up to it and get hit immediately with the pungent stank of a bag filled with rotting dog shit. It thrusts my memory back to the days where I was made to be a slave to man's best friend. I was a slave to over 30 dogs, under the watch of a pig of a man who drove me to the edge of frustration.

The dog shit bag, coated in maggots, needs to be moved in order to successfully recover any salvagable contents of my bag. With a gag and a cough, I move the bag as a shower of tiny white maggots bail like first class passengers on the Titanic.

With a stifiled breath, my bag is located, and pulled out from in between the undirty pieces of cardboard, which ended up protecting it. I hold the bag in the sidewalk. and I'm left with one question.

"Why?"

then, I either wake up or go to sleep.
 
A very interesting and abstract description of a single situation and the multitude of possibilities that can arise from that situation.

Your imagery is superb, and I really enjoy the way in which you will detail a situation from a slightly amused and cynical observer's position. It adds a certain style to your work which I very much enjoy.

Tidy. :)

-plaz out-
 
What a visualization this gave me.....Love it....

[qote]Whats in the bag?[/quote]

I can't help but wonder myself!!!!

~B
 
well, here it goes...

The bag contained letters, notes, cards, pictures, and other things that were given to me by my girlfriend at the time, more like my best friend.

I still hang out with her a lot since we live in the same city, and have the same friends.

I threw it away after realizing that she started dating a friend of mine, who told me that nothing was going to happen between them.

I went to a party the day after I threw away the bag, and ended up hanging out with my ex/best-friend/girlfriend. Personally, I had a blast with her at that party.

A friend of mine read this and told me that I should retrieve the bag asap b/c he did the same thing once, and regretted it ever since.

So, as soon as I got back from the party, I headed back to the dumpster. At one point, I thought it may have been emptied, but luckily, it wasn't.
 
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