Am I Dying Soon.

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

*fiction


Am I Dying Soon?

scared lonely afraid of matromony scared of dying alone afraid of getting close pushing away what i want ironically foolish acting tough
sitting by myself in the corner of my mind staring away evil of any kind can't get that far away from myself needing help
beautifully high 1/2 shut red eyes finger and toesnails to match as i look down to the ground turn around and walk as far away as possible from all of this
i'd never come back if i didn't have to but i guess i don't hve to do anything really who does
i think i'll just sit here for a while brick stone cement tile we've seen it all before cold dead on the floor and it's going to happen to you if you don't wise up
crossed my mind a day an image of your face used to be traced up there traced on the ground while chalk line around a glimpse into the future if you don't realize what you are doing to yourself

 

[plazma]

Great stuff, I like the way this piece seems to flow on from one word to the next, stringing together this eloquent, at times abstract seeming series of images and thoughts.

Fucking nice work.

-plaz out-

 

[frostyangel]

wow... that is weird... that you noticed that..

 

[cherub]

Definately a great piece,,, very intriguing to read

 

[Chef neurotoxic]

knifey ur so damn cool

 

[RareForm]

intriguing indeed. add this to the collection.

 

[up all night]

Original. Something severaly lacking in a lot of writing these days.

 

[Jimmy the Gun]

sounds like great poetry slam material. nice work