Alone ...

[BopGirl]

I look at you
Our eyes entwine
My heart said 'go'
'And make him mine'

We exchange words
And say hello
A common interest
Away we go

Your lips so soft
As they touch mine
The warm sensation
Oh so divine

I thought it was different
I thought you did care
But now its all changing
I think its unfair

I thought we shared
The same sensation
But all you've caused me
Is grief and aggravation

You toyed with my emotions
You gave me false hope
I was on cloud nine
But now I just mope

That one great night
Where nothing else mattered
Then the following week
All hope was shattered

Communication ceased
You didn't phone
And here I stand
Once again ... ALONE

I was going to call this poem "Men Suck" but changed my mind

Why are boys so difficult?

 

[mr_fluffy]

should have stuck with the original title too often the feeling is mutual.

i like the poem but, concise and yet so to the point. nice work.

 

[bisKi]

Boys are difficult because it's just that they are, well boys.

And I'm pretty sure they say the same about us (though I will stress we are much more stable ).

Good work BG, reminded me of me a long while back with this certain person. Word to the whole piece

xoxo//J

 

[katmeow]

All I can say is...

da boy's missin out!!

You're a champ matey

 

[BopGirl]

Cheers fluffster and bisKi

Your da best Kat! Let's hope you've got better luck!

Not long now!

 

[neverwas]

I look at you
Our eyes entwine
My heart said 'go'
'And make him mine'

***********

Communication ceased
You didn't phone
And here I stand
Once again ... ALONE

hey angel...sorry i had to wait till i was home to reply love i loved it hun...it is a perfect example of such a fragile matter. you know how to find me if needed *hugs*

kel

 

[BopGirl]

Cheers Kel *HuGZ*

 

[Seedlesss]

reminds myself maybe I should call that girl back*

 

[cherub]

I relate to this one,,,,, i dont get it, ! what is up!

 

[belisimo]

u r a good poet bop!
yah men do suck, but so do we (just not as much).