algae

[Shuba]

I want to slip between the cracks in the night
and witness a dying moment
to stand alone exuding an ancient atrophy
and allow the wind to withdraw with my memories

The way the rain washes over a suburban street
late at night
streetlights shimmering drearily on the dampened asphalt
I'll watch the trees mutate outside my window

while a languid sense of loss possesses me

 

[yakksoho]

This poem evokes such strong feelings with its beautiful imagery. EGood job and thank you for sharing it.

 

[vurtomatic]

short and good.

 

[o-townzM-chill]

that was hot.
wel done

 

[smileyfish]

I liked this - short but powerful in its imagery. I like the title too but maybe that's just the ecologist in me It plays like a film scene in my mind...

Smiley

 

[katmeow]

Like others have said I love the imagery in this.

Especially like the last line.

while a languid sense of loss possesses me