Adoration

[mini sari]

At his feet
I fall to my knees.
A river of shame cascades down my cheeks,
And I let out a cry so deathly that all of heaven stops and stairs.

Such beauty he has brought to me,
A cold sholder is all I have returned.

I sink my face into his lap
I plead for forgiveness for all the wrong I have done him
I beg for him to come back into my life

Despite my every sin
Every moment of denial
Every time I cried his name in anger
He takes me into his arms
Whipes the tears from my eyes
And whispers into my ear
"My daughter, I have been here all along"

At this moment
All I see is his eyes,
All I feel is his love.

I am eternally devoted.
My dearest heavenly father,
I am forever yours.

 

[neverwas]

Despite my every sin
Every moment of denial
Every time I cried his name in anger
He takes me into his arms
Whipes the tears from my eyes
And whispers into my ear
"My daughter, I have been here all along"

sweetness this was beautiful. it reminded me of all the times i use to go to Church when i was growing up with my family and how the preaher dude would stand up the front going 'come back to jesus' etc etc etc and he would always say no matter how much bad we did blah blah all we had to do was ask for forgivesness b;ah bl;ah and he would return.

it was well worded and i was suprised that it had the thought provoking it did. not many things remind me of my religous up bringing

this was indeed a good peice. very warm and loving and very subtle in the way u write.

 

[chrissy]

wonderful piece.. it sort of rings true in a LOT of ways for me... countless times i find myself in the same position.. always crawling back... if u feel far away from god, .. who moved?
wonderful. instead of writing something like this, i at times pray it to him. he never gives up on ppl and for THAT.. i am eternally grateful!

thanks for sharing
chrissy

 

[cherub]

awesome piece
everyone has there own strength and weakness we fall to, and beliefs we go by.

amazing and powerfully written.