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One Last Thought...

i just wrote this at work, it confuses me too lol.
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i just changed the title to "One Last Thought..." cos my mate said it sounded like a suicide note...


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Trippy Thoughts Keep
Racing Through My Head
Am I Living Life?
Or Am I Really Dead?

Is This All Just A Dream
And I Will Soon Wake Up?
Into A World Unknown
In A Life Made Up

When Will It Be Over
When Will I Awaken
Is My Heart Really Broken
Has My Soul Already Been Taken

Am I Lying In The Dirt
In My Own Wooden Box
Will I Get Out Of Here
Oh No, It Has Locks

Am I Stuck In Here Forever
Its Something I Cant Think About
Will Anyone Hear Me
Oh God, I Cannot Shout

My Voice Is A Whisper
Heard By No One
You Cant Help Me
My Life Is Over And Done

Please Someone Find Me
Im In The Darkness Now
Im Crying So Much
I Have To Get Out Somehow

It’s Just So Hard To Breathe
The Air Is Running Out
This Is My Last Hour
That I Have No Doubt

Ow, My Head Hurts
All Hopes Of Living Are Broken
My Throat Is Clogging Up
Oh Man, Now Im Choking

Im Starting To Sweat
My Breaths Are Short And Quick
My Wrists Are Bleeding
The Blood Is Running Thick

What’s Happened To Me?
Why Am I In This Place
Im Shaking So Much
Now Death, I Have To Face

I Can’t Give Up
There’s Too Much At Stake
Why Did I Do This To Myself
Why Is It My Life To Take

I Should Have Thought Twice
Before I Took The Knife
Now I’ve Lost Everything
That Meant Something To My Life

Now Im All Confused
Should I Go Or Not
I Guess I Have To Now
No Doubt U Would’ve All Forgot

Goodbye Cruel World
Wish I Could Stay Longer
But Hopefully Now
You Will All Become Stronger

Don’t Let My Death Effect You
You All Did Nothing Wrong
Its Just That I’ve Been On This Earth
For Far Too Long

Luv Jessi Miller xo
20-08-2004

 

[doofqueen]

i went through omething similar a few weeks back actually, acid indoors is evil hehe

very well expressed and written

 

[cherub]

I enjoyed reading this alot ,,,,,,,,,,, seems you kinda matched my head up lately with my thoughts. great stuff

and thanks !

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

Very nice use of words and structure within this, the emotion is there but not too raw which is good as it should be about showing and not telling. Well done!