Abduction

[Pyar]

Abduction
It comes prods, pokes,
violates you.
You struggle, move away.
Warmth, gushing around
protects you from impending harm.
Punctured,
the warmth flows.
Do you feel it ebbing away?
Cold metallic fingers,
reach out,
grab you.
Your fragile form,
so human.
You have eyes,
big, black, deep.
Tiny finger like projections
move towards your mouth.
You try to move.
Squirm.
Violent movements.
They continue to reach you.
You cant get away, escape,
they cannot get you.
Your host doesnt want this parting.
She knows of your existance.
she has felt,
the changes to her form,
to accomodate that of yours.
She too wants to run
hide,
can she do this?
You're defenceless.
You know not our ways,
of hurting,
manipulating.
You're pure,
untainted, sacred.
The fingers desecrate,
maul at your tiny form.
Your hands,
legs,
Crushed.
Sucked out of,
your host.
She feels your death,
with that her own.
There is no trace of you now.
You never existed,
therefore,
you never died?
No, death is to harsh.
You were abducted,
by a race that should have,
been your own.
Taken,
Assulted,
Brutally killed.
So through your death,
they may live.
Umm, right, i wrote this some while ago, but didnt really show anyone cause the structure and other " poetry" kinda stuff is missing.
I just felt like airing it out today, one of those life spring clean things. thanks.

 

[Neo-Real]

bump
[ 19 June 2002: Message edited by: Neo-Real ]

 

[E-girl]

cause the structure and other " poetry" kinda stuff is missing.
poetry has no defined structure, and poetry is what is in the heart of the poet. therefore, you have accomplished both without even knowing it.
i cant say i fully understand everything that everyone writes, but i thought your style was really awesome, and you paint a very vivid description. this was a great piece.