a song draft... comments welcomed

[.dR spgeddi]

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
You all crazy?
get off ya arse lazy,
make a better life be unintimidated,
not intoxicated, or primitive,
this is the X-Life….. unlimited.

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
pump the punks drunk with junk that jumps Jupiter
thump the chumps back, front the front git with it
Spit with us, let your mind flow and get the gist of it
Only one chance make the most of it
This is the X-life… unlimited

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
You all crazy?
some people just amaze me,
got so much talent but yo mutha-fucken lazy!

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
Love to have love above the glove shove ritual
Hunt the cunt enough rewards the habitual
Individual, but let your body go and get spiritual
Coz people in the know know best of all
This is the X-life… festival

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
You all crazy? You all crazy? You all crazy? You all crazy?
There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
You all crazy? You all crazy? You all crazy? You all crazy?
There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
You all crazy?
some people just amaze me,
got so much talent but yo mutha-fucken lazy!
There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….

 

[ashaman]

*music fades out, start talking to the mic*
Come on man, i know you can...

 

[.dR spgeddi]

[edit]
i was drunk just now...

 

[Raz]

I wasn't sure at first, but it gets better as it goes along, and THESE three verses fucking rock!!

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
pump the punks drunk with junk that jumps Jupiter
thump the chumps back, front the front git with it
Spit with us, let your mind flow and get the gist of it
Only one chance make the most of it
This is the X-life… unlimited

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
You all crazy?
some people just amaze me,
got so much talent but yo mutha-fucken lazy!

There aint no limits, but the limits made by a man….
Love to have love above the glove shove ritual
Hunt the cunt enough rewards the habitual
Individual, but let your body go and get spiritual
Coz people in the know know best of all
This is the X-life… festival

I like the 'aint no limits but the limits made by a man' as a refrain or whatever you call it too....I think this would go off. :D

 

[RareForm]

good

 

[.dR spgeddi]

i tried this with a friend.
we both sing the bold hook line and then take turns with a fast verse.
we got heaps of new ones off the top of our heads, then, off our heads didnt write anything down and of course... now its gone!