a sliver

[Zennie]

I could have written this
any day
anywhere and it
would have been the
same.
A year ago
touching your face
six months ago
laying together in
our bed or
tonight
alone.
It would have been
filled with
passion and warmth and
tenderness. Sometimes
tears and always
smiles.
Gestures and touches
kisses and sighs.
Words conveying only a
sliver of true
meaning.
But in the end,
writing with the only
words I know
I would say:
I love you.

 

[FoX]

Zennie!
Beautiful...and good to see your name....

 

[Ruofa]

very fucking nice.
i've read this forum for a long time, but this is the first time i've actually been moved to posting. take that for what it's worth: a lot.

 

[Angelight]

i miss you

 

[harraser]

Ive now read this a couple of times and was actually rather surprised that I hadnt replied.....
its a beautiful peice, "I love you" truly is the simplest and most beautiful of all poetry. nice

 

[LapDawg]

very heartwarming. Nice to see ya around these parts.

 

[Yoyi]

HI!! Beautiful!!!!

 

[Dakeva]

Susan this piece made me realize a few things...
1. How much I’ve missed your writings
2. How much I’ve missed YOU!
3. How lucky we are for having our capacity to love and be loved.