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Bluelighter
Can you please tell me what you think of the poem? I'm no poet, but it was just a way to get this terrible reality on paper.
I have a 5 year old neice who is currently being raised by coke addicts. They used to hide it, but I found out they're doing it in front of her (she described it to me, but she had no idea what it was. I told her it was old people's medicine).
I'm only 15, and my parents want to just mind their own business. So I wrote a song for her. I was under the influence of hydrocodone when doing this.
Look in the mirror,
do you see a little girl? Listen and hear her,
watching her parents snort lines,
so young she can't even tell time,
do you know a little girl who's only place in the world
is to sit back and not understand,
not being able to comprehend,
That girl needs you to stop,
Daddy bringing her furniture to the pawn shop,
just for another fix,
Turning his 5 year old daughter into a coke addict.
It's really talking to my aunt, who was also raised by a coke addict, except her parents were much worse (they beat her, not just spanking, but flat out punching a 7 year old girl for not being quiet). Also to my uncle, but not some lines, like the first one. It's saying, look what happened to you. Don't do it to your daughter.
And the thing about the furniture is true. He tried to sell the kid's dresser at a pawnshop, but got turned down. Asshole just left her clothes in a big pile in the room, dragged the dresser out and left it in ther street when he couldn't sell it.
I have a 5 year old neice who is currently being raised by coke addicts. They used to hide it, but I found out they're doing it in front of her (she described it to me, but she had no idea what it was. I told her it was old people's medicine).
I'm only 15, and my parents want to just mind their own business. So I wrote a song for her. I was under the influence of hydrocodone when doing this.
Look in the mirror,
do you see a little girl? Listen and hear her,
watching her parents snort lines,
so young she can't even tell time,
do you know a little girl who's only place in the world
is to sit back and not understand,
not being able to comprehend,
That girl needs you to stop,
Daddy bringing her furniture to the pawn shop,
just for another fix,
Turning his 5 year old daughter into a coke addict.
It's really talking to my aunt, who was also raised by a coke addict, except her parents were much worse (they beat her, not just spanking, but flat out punching a 7 year old girl for not being quiet). Also to my uncle, but not some lines, like the first one. It's saying, look what happened to you. Don't do it to your daughter.
And the thing about the furniture is true. He tried to sell the kid's dresser at a pawnshop, but got turned down. Asshole just left her clothes in a big pile in the room, dragged the dresser out and left it in ther street when he couldn't sell it.
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