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harraser

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I'll take a walk in the wind
And in the driving rain I'll practice an art of motion
And then one day ill die,
I'll die in perfect time with you.

Our faces side by side
On the leaves near a hole in the forest floor
They'll exclaim "God thats amazing
They both look the same!"

Theres a garden in a yard
Its the place I'll go when im gone
To swing on weeping willow
And relive things i dont remember.

A lovely fantasy
To be here when I die
I see myself as a Universe
When Im the nothing on the outside.
 
i love the feeling in this one ant, and the tone. You have a wonderful way of making everything seem poetic - even those things that aren't particularly so... ;)
 
*hugs*

harraser said:

Theres a garden in a yard
Its the place I'll go when im gone
To swing on weeping willow
And relive things i dont remember.

*****
When Im the nothing on the outside.
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isnt it funny how the littlest thigns can have the most impact and open u up so much.

*sighs* memories will never die hun. not even when ur dead :)

this somewhat touched me...mainly i think its cause i remember very little bout my early childhood and have chosen to block a lot of it out. one day i will remember it all...maybe swinging from ur willow tree :)

this peice was lovely to read...very soft and also mellow. it flowed nicely and with its touch of sadness brought on by death it is a good work =D

*snuggles hun*
 
(starfalls: I got your message! :))

Who ever said that death had to be an ending, and nothing more? I always preferred to think of it as a new adventure - you've taken that one step further and it is beautiful to think of.

Much like you are beautiful to think of. Despite the fact that you mean so much to me, you're one hell of a writer.
 
wowzzles

"Theres a garden in a yard
Its the place I'll go when im gone
To swing on weeping willow
And relive things i dont remember."

^ that bit up there's my fav.
relive things i don't remember- thats something i wanna do everyday. so in a way i guess i'm speeding up my death?
maybe some things i don't remember are worth not remembering but no matter how tough they can be and how they seem to imprint themselves unwanted on my soul.. it's worth remembering... it's all that "experience" shit.

i love this, afny anaconda.

chrissy
 
big bump!!!

I'll take a walk in the wind
And in the driving rain I'll practice an art of motion
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Our faces side by side
On the leaves near a hole in the forest floor
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*sighs* this is a worthy bump.

...it brought back one certian walk in the pouring wind and rain, and reminded me of that beautiful oak tree we saw and played under ;)

ive always loved the way imagery and description come so easily to your peices :)


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miss you baby xx ~K~
 
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I love this poem. It's one of my favourites of harraser's and he's one poet who I miss in this forum and in my life.

Hope you're well and still loving and juggling, babe.
 
"A lovely fantasy
To be here when I die
I see myself as a Universe
When Im the nothing on the outside.'

I love the whole thing, especially this part. It's great :)
 
I see myself as a Universe
When Im the nothing on the outside.
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I know how this feels.
You've put some of my experiences into words, and not just any words, some abstract-vivid-image-word fusion.
Like re-living things I don't remember. ;)
 
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