....A poem without a beginning

[Space_dolphin]

This is my first post in this forum. I wrote this a while ago, but its the ending of a poem and i cant think of an appropriate beginning yet. Its' called "Something inside me stirs"
....and the source of
the raging fire that burns in my eyes
is a deep undeniable hate fuelled from within
somewhere in the depths of an incomprehendable evil
living in my mind
and it wasnt until
I stared him straight in the eye
as he coughed and choked on his own blood
and watched as he died, that i really knew what it was
to hate someone

 

[clue_liss]

OMG
That is disturbing..
But well written.
I have often wished I could hate.. but I have never been capable of it. From the words you write.. I am glad I have never hated.. and I trust that I never will.
I hope this hatred in your heart can now be set free.. and your mind and soul can rest.

 

[Foxy XTC Pilot]

I know the frustration of only having a half a poem written. It happens to me all the time. I get a lot of great thoughts for poems and they are "right there", but I just can't seem to find the inspiration to finish them. What helps me is to just relax and meditate. Open your mind up to the subject in which you want to write. It can help.
You have a great start or finish (whatever you want to call it) here. I will look forward to the finished product. Open your mind and the rest will come in time. But only when it is ready to. I share your frustration!!!! *HUGS*

 

[E-girl]

a very powerful message... and a great first post. i look forward to many more.