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a poem:bomes marrow. pt 1

panic in paradise

panic in paradise

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a poem:bones marrow. pt 1

i don't believe in karma,
but feel these lessons we must learn,
are taught hard.
discipline is sought uniquely, discipline is what we feel we own.


as fragile and carrying as a birds bone;
a hallow wish; ours to own.
it carries us where our instincts lead,
to the fields shared, or our empty, vast
fields of greed.

long lasting is who's..?

these fears are yours alone;
your fears,
are the substance,
thee marrow of your own.

far distant are the wishes of our days,
yet in the same fields we settle to graze.

with such haste,
we eat spitefully,
but when strength is its strongest,
all together
we are natures praise.
our wings aloft will help each other raise;
with the warming winds; into the warmer days.


this is really rough, but me likes...
it just needs some time on the mind.
 
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"with such haste,
we eat spitefully,
but when strength is its strongest,
all together
we are natures praise.
our wings aloft will help each other raise;
with the warming winds; into the warmer days."


Fan-bloody-tastic, I <3 this!
 
revival ~ / 2-22-12(i believe in karma now..;-D


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an ode to karma ~
these lessons must be learned,
and taught hard.

as fragile you are
and carrying as a birds bone;
a hallow wish; it is yours to own.
it carries all where their instincts lead,
to the fields shared, our, vast
fields of green.

separate might be the wishes of others days,
yet in the same fields, we all settle to graze.

with such haste,
we eat spitefully,
but when strength is its strongest,
all together
we are natures praise.
our wings aloft will help each other raise,
with the warming winds, into the warmer days.



thanks Danielle


<3
=D
 
I'm glad you changed it, the law of compensation (karma) is very real =)

I really enjoyed this work, I love mystic poetry =)
 
thanks pk.

cough* it was as if Hera, Athena and Aphrodite, and ERIS were all there....and here for a year.! so i thought i should take it easy, and write about it....into the summer wind and bare the shape such hither-ed ware lends.
 
nice, nice =)

I enjoy everything you write, even your short replies, you have a real unique way of expressing yourself in writing, I actually feel happy when I read your words hehe =)
 
pk. said:
nice, nice =)

I enjoy everything you write, even your short replies, you have a real unique way of expressing yourself in writing, I actually feel happy when I read your words hehe =)
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... then it is worth it ;)

the feeling is definitely mutual my friend
to the greener fields ! of which we lay,
confidently already
<3


Life Love & Light !
 
i am she as you
who ever you be are he
(and i am him)
him who she as
will
always be told
as to
where ever did you go
now you
your dreams have been sold
so through
darkness ever hold
shine through
for who else is to be



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