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A Peripheral View to a Kill

TiberCross

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Somehow I seem to have drifted down a narrow path
through the sifted and pathetic
and epileptically dissected minds
who remind me of shadows that dance on the wall.

Treated like particle-dope, the fruit of life I only hope.

Remind myself to leave my feelings on the shelf
and erase the hate that blinds myself.
To intergalactic reaches and sandstorm beaches
where anti- anti- is the foremost battle cry
and if you can't think like the rest or act like the best,
Then depart from here and build your own nest.

Trust can rust and fade
but hate will continue to evade
the large congruent shapes and masses
who want to castrate the bastards and fill their minds with stains.

Flee the alps and praise the grain on which we were raised.

So long, so long it seems to have been when our thoughts were our weapons and our strength to kill

Entanglements corrupt my sarcastic point of view.
I wish I was incorruptible. I am wishing I was you.
An evil antagonist stood up and told the truth; we all die and the end comes soon.

Disillusion directs itself towards me
and then I am trapped in a hole of distortion and deception.

How many lives can I live
Without holding any transgressions against anyone or anything?
A sting is a sting, a cringe is a cringe, the way the wind is blowing in our minds we should all find sympathy or empathy.

Poison green, poison blue, poison love, poison you.
We all die soon.
Too soon it seems to damage all of our dreams.
Dreams of imprisonment and detainment. I don't remember these dreams.
Do you?
Too soon. Too soon it seems to fulfill our dreams and screams and screams and screams.

I see the ancient summer sea drifting aimlessly
towards me, flaunting and jumping while flailing and stomping.
Whispers and purrs in the garden of life, past the lies and convictions.
Strife burns and distorts all of my perceptions left empty and
disconnected; though I am connected, connected to the drought of hate-peace-love-desires and disease.
 
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Where shall I go on my trip to a parallel-hell where we fight for freedom just the same as we do here?

i love the way ur peices always make me pick one section and think about it.

ur writting just gets better and better :D *hugs*
 
TiberCross said:
Somehow I seem to have drifted down a narrow path through the sifted and pathetic and epileptically dissected minds who remind me of shadows that dance on the wall. Treated like particle-dope, the fruit of life I only hope.

Remind myself to leave my feelings on the shelf and erase the hate that blinds myself.
To intergalactic reaches and sandstorm beaches were anti- anti- is the foremost battle cry and if you can't think like the rest or act like the best, Then depart from here and build your own nest.

Trust can rust and fade but hate will continue to evade the small and congruent shapes and masses who want to castrate the bastards and fill their minds with stains. Flee the alps and praise the grain on which we were raised. So long, so long it seems to have been when our thoughts were our weapons and our strength to kill

Entanglements corrupt my sarcastic point of view.
I wish I was incorruptible. I am wishing I was you.
An evil antagonist stood up and told the truth; we all die and the end comes soon.

Disillusion directs itself towards me and then I am trapped in a hole of distortion and deception. How many lives can I live
Without holding any transgressions against anyone or anything?
A sting is a sting, a cringe is a cringe, the way the wind is blowing in our minds we should all find sympathy or empathy.

Poison green, poison blue, poison love, poison you.
We all die soon.
Too soon it seems to damage all of our dreams.
Dreams of imprisonment and detainment. I don't remember these dreams.
Do you?
Too soon. Too soon it seems to fulfill our dreams and screams and screams and screams.

I see the ancient summer sea drifting aimlessly
towards me, flaunting and jumping while flailing and stomping.
Whispers and purrs in the garden of life, past the lies and convictions.
Strife burns and distorts all of my perceptions left empty and
disconnected; though I am connected, connected to the drought of hate-peace-love-desires and disease.

I stand. Can you stand or will you be thrown...overboard to fall into a sea of stolen waters?
Where, yes, we can be free but only in diseased harmony--do not wonder-do not wander.
Be pacified in your arrangements; be strange in your containments,
or rather, contaminate your peers with the ecstatic world of Freud.
Martyrs live forever--while you die vain.

I burn a candle in the blackened and petrified face of democracy,
damaged and weathered by age-old hypocrisy
Sailing, sailing once again; the right words at my tongue, the wrong words in my ear.
Fear for fear, eye for an eye, decadence has thwarted the fear that is nigh, making a ship on which to sail. Where shall I go on my trip to a parallel-hell where we fight for freedom just the same as we do here?
But the injustice is smaller and the vision is clear, weird.

I thought maybe I could point out a "certain" section and tell you it was good: Well that happened to be the whole damn thing: :\ %)
 
This poem is fuckin awesome! Have to sya its one of the best I've read in awhile. Much props
 
damn. this piece left me speechless. the force of your words draws me in as if they are magnetic....awesome, just awesome
 
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