A Glimmer of Hope

[FoxyKel]

I shouldn't wonder
wonder is a disease
a glimmer of hope
with no guarantees
Guarantees designed
to tear me down
while diseases hide
under my surgical gown
I shouldn't wear gowns
they're bad for the soul
they make you a prisoner
of disease control
Control was designed
to tear me down
while diseases hide
under my surgical gown

 

[cacie]

I shouldn't wonder
wonder is a disease
a glimmer of hope
with no guarantees
i really like this part,

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

i really really like this.
for some reason, as i read this over again, i am getting a double meaning. perhaps i am reading too far into this.
anyway, i am fond of writing double meanings, and not realizing i write double meanings until they are down on paper.
anyway, you have me doubt meaning, metaphorically speaking.
and i really like this piece of work.
thanks.

 

[Bi KaNd*E* RaVeR]

{{{{kelle}}}}
nicely done lovey