a brief lesson in etiquette

[sourlemone]

that woman looks.........at me and she thinks
distantly occupied.........that I'm rather good looking
judging by.....................that lustful expression
her glazed eyes............ever so enticing if only
she could use................a man or
some visine

she gets up..................voluptuous, spring's first white lotus
to go............................and look at the way she walks to
meet her boyfriend.......meet somebody or do something now is
her chance...................my chance
to leave........................to ask
so she doesn't.............disappear or
have to give this..........poor soul more torment
.....................................or maybe she thinks i'm a
creep............................who wants
her number...................but it's not like that I just want to-
-not in the mood
........................................talk

The harshness of unrequited, unknown love. Instant coffee, brewed quick, slightly acrid, a one minute hit.

(edit: work in progress
edit: formatting still fucked)

 

[harraser]

i really like this! good work!!!

and dont worry about the formatting, its not perfect but you get the idea. bravo!