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[PittyBird]

Opinions please

Take your pills, cry on cue
Do just what we tell you to
Everything now depends on you
We don't care what we put you through

We can talk about it later
It's not like your pain is real
Show the world your agony
Your heart is no big deal

See how we depend on you?
Now here's what you need to do...
It's not loaded, just pretend...
Wait, what are those little things in your hand?

 

[PittyBird]

bump

 

[Jungle Bunny]

Can you....

It's not loaded, just pretend... Wait, what are those little things in your hand

I'm intrigued can you please explin this last part. The begining I get but the ending gives me a little bit of a "Hmmmm could it be" feeling. I'm sure you know what I mean. So please explain the last part for me.

 

[PittyBird]

It's to make the reader wonder...hmm, is she really going to use it on herself, or on her antagonist?

 

[Nik137]

I prefer the mysterious end, you're not sure... it allows the reader to question and keeps it open to interpretation, id leave it. nice work