20th Century Love Story

[silentpoet]

Moons have risen,
Calendars thrown away.
I remember our love,
Our love from last May.
Two souls as one,
Free from life.
Vespers of song,
Eternal Stryfe.
She walked down a road,
I first caught her face.
Heaven on Earth,
Could there really be such a place?
Like two flames dancing,
Akwardness now past.
Entity now mine,
Tranquillity at last.
Mars in the backround,
Eyes of the Gods.
Astrology encompassed,
Salvation of odds.
Truth be thy name,
We lived in bliss.
The World stopped spinning,
From the power of our first kiss.
These feelings we shared,
Floating on a cloud.
Like the peace felt,
When a Buddist Monk bowed.
Let down your guard,
Let in hope.
Inhale our love,
Exhale the smoke.
Like all good things,
You said it was time to end.
I've found someone else,
But I'll still be your friend.
Metal was shattered,
Glass was bent.
"Fuck you God",
Was all I could vent.
My heart was broken,
But I knew the cost.
I searched for love,
But it was paradise lost.
Emotions so bitter,
Mind so evil.
Perspectives are unfocused,
My body now feeble.
The Sun still sets,
The Moon still rises.
No matter what happens on Earth,
Or how big the crises.
I'm a lost cause,
Defeated from art.
Cold be these days,
Cold be thy heart.

 

[PixieGirl]

WOW. I know all those emotions all too well

 

[Sweetpea]

I think silentpoet could be a famouspoet

 

[titania]

Silentpoet, thats beautiful...
I wanted to say this in one of your earlier threads, but even though I don't know you, from reading your words and your thoughts, you have so much to offer someone and you will find that person that you are looking for.
When you do, it will be the most wonderful thing and I hope that she will bring you all the happiness you deserve.
You truly are a wonderful person.

 

[silentpoet]

Thank you all for the kind words. I truly am appreciative for your time and responses. Thank you.
SP

 

[XoXoMeL]

That was so beautiful! I think we've all had those feelings at one point. Good luck in love to you!!!
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xoxoxoxo
*MeL*

 

[Yo-yo boy]

The pen is far mightier than the sword and in you skilled hands it becomes a deadly weapon. Painfully beautiful poetry.
Randy
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HUGS and Smiles
Randy
[email protected]
AIM:yoyoboyRandy
Me Glow

 

[Mellabopper]

Let down your guard,
Let in hope.
Inhale our love,
Exhale the smoke.

LOVE IT!

Mella

 

[bluegirl1]

Breath taking. It's like re-living every heart break all over again but knowing that someone else has too felt the pain. Anticipation of more arises.
M.
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"Dance like no one's watching,
and love like it's never going to hurt...."

 

[seyton]

awkwardness.

 

[FallingAngel]

all too true, beautifully written

 

[sunEdltye]

 

[5FACES]

brought a tear to my eye. one word....
brilliant!
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before love there are
memeories of innonence.
after there are none...

 

[sunEdltye]

i need this one

 

[Mellabopper]

awww
/me hugs evan
you rock hun

::mwah::
Mella