2 Weeks is such a long wait

[Squeaks]

I hardly ever post in here because I am not poeticcally gifted but here goes....
Living a life
One day you are just fine
walking around the globe,
smiling, laughing, enjoying every inch of your life
The next day a sword is hanging above your head
The news you got made it appear
You realize that the smile you had,
was a bit to big
The laughs you had,
where a bit to hard
The joy you had,
was a bit to much
but there is nothing you can change
You can't change the past
But YOU can change the future
Don't let the sword take control of your life
there are to many things which are still worth living for......

 

[Bi KaNd*E* RaVeR]

i think it's beautiful hun!
i hope sumone close to me reads it..
thank u!
*hug*

 

[harraser]

Don't let the sword take control of your life
there are to many things which are still worth living for......
Indeed!! Ive spent my life focused on the sword before, its not happy times. its so much easier to just let it go and be happy

 

[Angelight]

i miss you squeakers

 

[Squeaks]

as do I angela sweetie as do I

 

[Dagny]

Squeakers dear! This is wonderful, beautifully written. And very powerful, it feels like you've taken me back to a place I've been before... thank you for this. And I do hope to see you again, perhaps in a few weeks.

 

[rm-rf]

I hardly ever post in here because I am not poeticcally gifted but here goes....
dont say that, i thought it was good. All words from the soul are poetic.

 

[Squeaks]

thanx guys/gals
Dagny I better get to see you again soon!