overall i like the track, especially the melody towards the end, kind of a swirling synth sound, nice and warm.
I like your intro part but the hi hats sounded a bit harsh to my ears, could be me though. And into the second part sounds like you have too much sound in the mids. The start of the second part could also use a more interesting melody imo. Other than that i enjoyed it.
i was going to post one i was working on today but i just listened to it and it sounds like garbage lol i'll put something up later.
edit: there we go, as good as it's going to get today:
http://soundcloud.com/panickatt/july8guitar